lunes, 7 de agosto de 2017

On the connection between narrative knowledge and narrative reliability

On the connection between narrative knowledge and narrative reliability

Note: The following essay received an A at Harvard University Summer School

Intuitively one tends to assume that the knowledge a narrator has is necessarily directly proportional to the extent to which a reader can trust the narration[1]. This paper will analyse this intuition by arguing that whilst it is true in some cases, exemplified in A day’s wait; in other circumstances our intuition is problematic, as shown in Car crash while hitchhiking. Therefore, the validity of the narrator’s epistemological skills is not always connected with the reliability of what he is saying.
Hemingway’s narrator introduces the reader to two main sources of knowledge: to reminiscence of past sensory experience and to logical thinking, both of which are equated with his reliability, thus providing evidence for the initial intuition. The former kind of knowledge is expressed when the narrator says: “‘Something like a hundred’, I said. It was a hundred and two and four tenths”. This quotation includes two verbs conjugated in the past tense (“said” and “was”), which indicate that the action has already finished by the time the narrator is reporting the events and therefore A day’s wait is a retrospective narration. So the father has no present experience of taking Schatz’s temperature, but the memory of having done so. This consequently means that the method through which he obtains that knowledge which he now shares with the reader must be through reminiscence. As for the narrator’s reliability, although the presence of the word “something” in this quotation does imply that the narrator is uncertain about the temperature, this initial reaction is soon challenged by an accurate description of the temperature: “one hundred and two and four tenths”. Given that the speaker remembers the exact temperature, the reader must assume that the cause of this apparent inaccuracy stems from the narrator’s decision not to tell Schatz the whole truth concerning his temperature, as opposed to from a lack of knowledge. So despite the fact that the narrator is not sharing the precise information with his son, he is accurately doing so with the reader. Consequently, this passage shows that the reader can trust the narrator’s testimony.
The second source of knowledge for Hemingway’s narrator is his logical thinking. When Schatz asks “about what time do you think I’m going to die?”, the father reaches the conclusion that “He had been waiting to die all day, ever since nine o’clock in the morning”. Based on his son’s odd behaviour throughout the whole day[2], this piece of dialogue makes the narrator use abductive reasoning to grant him knowledge. He comes up with the most plausible explanation: the cause of Schatz’s fatalistic attitude was his preoccupation with mortality. With regards to his reliability as narrator, the correctness of his conclusion provides the reader with enough information to understand the cause of Schatz’s behaviour. Based on the speaker’s conclusion, the reader can now reread the story and connect Schatz’s attitude with his preoccupation with death. Thus with this piece of information, the reader can now understand sentences with incomplete syntax such as “I can’t keep from thinking” (about death). The reader’s newly acquired knowledge about Schatz helps him understand his behaviour. Hemingway takes the reader in the same epistemic journey the narrator goes through. The reader’s knowledge corresponds to that of the narrator and the truth of the latter’s knowledge helps the former make causal sense of the events through the same logical mechanism: abduction. So in this story the narrator’s possession of epistemic methods, such as reminiscence and logical thinking, coincides with his reliability and thus the abovementioned intuition works.
Johnson’s tale presents an unreliable narrator. This is evidenced by the disconnectedness of the text. The following piece of dialogue demonstrates that there is a lack of narrative clarity in what he is saying: “‘Are you hearing unusual sounds or voices?’ the doctor asked. ‘Help us, oh God, it hurts’ the boxes of cotton screamed. ‘Not exactly’ I said”. He does not tell the truth to the doctor, instead he ambiguously offers a false account of his experience. The personification of the boxes implies that the speaker is indeed hearing voices in his head. The reader does not get any sort of explanation as to why the boxes of cotton seem in pain or why the narrator is the only one to hear them[3]. The image feels random and is left unexplored and disconnected from the rest of the scene, opening the possibility of madness. These inaccuracies make the reader wonder whether he can believe anything of what the narrator is saying at all. Furthermore, the story closes with a pastoral image of nature that has nothing to do with the hospital and serves no particular purpose: “It was raining. Gigantic ferns leaned over us (…)”. The appearance of the first person of the plural form implies there is more than one person in that final image. However, the reader is not told who that other person or those other people are or why they are with the narrator in this landscape, which again provides the narrative with an aura of disconnectedness and a lack of clarity.
If our intuition that a narrator’s knowledge is directly to proportional to his reliability is correct, having established that the narrator of Car crash while hitchhiking is unreliable it should follow that he also lacks knowledge. Nonetheless, this is not the case and thus there are no grounds to defend the existence of such a necessary correlation in this story. The narrator can be interpreted as someone in possession of some sort of inexplicable knowledge. In the line “and you, you ridiculous people, you expect me to help you”, in which he speaks directly to the reader, the word “ridiculous” implies that the narrator pictures himself living in a different realm of reality which puts him in a position to insult the reader, depriving the reader’s existence any sense of purpose. Following what Nietzsche[4] would call a master’s morality, he looks down on humanity and imposes his own set of wills and values upon it. He believes that he has acquired a status which separates him from the non-teleological lives of human beings. This state corresponds to Nietzsche’s concept of the Übermensch. If the narrator is in an intellectually superior position to that of the reader, he must have a type of higher-level knowledge which the reader cannot possibly have[5]. I would venture so far as to say that such a knowledge is that of being a character inside a story. Johnson’s plot depicts a reality in which what Nietzsche considers to be the ultimate step of human evolution consists of being part of a work of fiction. Such a realm cannot be expressed in words; it must be experienced. It is the one thing that the reader cannot know but that a fictional narrator can know. Readers do “expect” narrators to “help” them understand the plots, but this narrator is aware that that cannot happen here because he cannot explain what it is like to live in such a different epistemological world[6]; that of pure art or what Nietzsche would call “the sublime”. His knowledge does not correspond to what the reader is able to know, which explains the unreliability of his narration. As a result, Johnson’s story demonstrates that there can actually be an unreliable but yet highly knowledgeable narrator.
To conclude, although there are cases in which a narrator’s knowledge directly corresponds to the extent to which a reader can trust what he is saying, this relationship does not always work. So it must be concluded that a narrator’s knowledge is not an infallible indicator of narrative reliability. There is a degree of independence between these two concepts. Both factors may coincide sometimes but, contrary to the initial intuition, one cannot trace a pattern between them that applies to all cases.
Word count: 1491

Fernando Martinez-Periset
Harvard University



[1]  In other words, the more knowledgeable the narrator, the more trustworthy he is and vice versa; for it seems intuitively absurd (at least to me) to suppose that a story can have a reliable narrator who knows nothing about the events being told or an unreliable narrator who knows everything about the plot, assuming the texts are non-deceptive .
[2] For example, he refuses to let anyone in his room and he asks his father to leave if it “is going to bother him” (to see him die).
[3] Although one may infer it is because of the narrator’s drug abuse.
[4] As an anecdote, my hairdresser who is absolutely insane has been lecturing me on Nietzsche’s philosophy for years!
[5] It’s a world in which Hume-ans Kant drive De-cars without Russelling
[6] As Thomas Nagel points out, there is no way of knowing ‘what it is like’ to be a bat. His illustration applies to this case too. The reader cannot know ‘what it is like’ to be a character inside a story.

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